In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that there is an abrupt change in the
life
style
of people in almost in every domain, be it
communication
,
travel
, health and psychology.
Consequently
, the lifestyle is influencing the relationships of family in both positive and negative manner. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of
life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
on family relationships. On the one hand, the
life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
changes are primarily seen in both
communication
and
travel
.
Firstly
, the technology improved the
communication
between family members and one can reach out their immediate family and other relatives in
matter
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a matter
of seconds over
internet
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the internet
and mobile phone.
For example
, people living abroad away from their parents can stay in touch almost every day with the help of audio and video calling facilities of mobile phones.
Secondly
, the people can
travel
to
any
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
remote part of the world using various modes of transportation
such
as improved road, rail and air facilities. Presently, anybody can reach any place in
few days
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a few days
, unlike few
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, unlike a few
months earlier. In turn,
this
helps in maintaining healthy relationships between family members as they can be physically and mentally available to others.
On the other hand
, families are adopting unhealthy practices both physically and psychologically.
This
is mostly due to the changing
life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
choices accessible for people.
For instance
, people are increasingly dependent on fast food, which is causing conflicts between
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
and younger family members as there is a disagreement over what is healthy and what unhealthy.
Further
, the present generation is hurrying to reach the financial stability early in their career. With the availability of home and car loans in a quicker way, they are buying houses and cars in a hurried manner.
However
,
Accept space
,
this
is putting lots of financial burden on their shoulders and there is always a risk of not re-paying the loan if the job is lost. Elders of
family
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the family
families
are against
this
tendency as
this
would put the younger generation under tremendous stress and pressure. To conclude, it can be seen clearly that the plus points of increased family relationships
is seen
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are seen
with the positive changes in
communication
and
travel
.
Also
, people can choose to abandon the junk food as well as their bad financial practices, which is under their control.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographic separation
  • economic advancement
  • technological advancements
  • face-to-face interactions
  • egalitarian structures
  • gender roles
  • traditional roles
  • work demands
  • financial stability
  • access to education
  • healthcare
  • cultural shifts
  • traditions
  • cultural identity
  • family heritage
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