In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is believed that there is an abrupt change in the

life

style

of people in almost in every domain, be it

communication

travel

, health and psychology.

Consequently

, the lifestyle is influencing the relationships of family in both positive and negative manner. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of

life

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

style

on family relationships. On the one hand, the

life

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

style

changes are primarily seen in both

communication

and

travel

Firstly

, the technology improved the

communication

between family members and one can reach out their immediate family and other relatives in

matter

Suggestion

a matter

of seconds over

internet

Suggestion

the internet

and mobile phone.

For example

, people living abroad away from their parents can stay in touch almost every day with the help of audio and video calling facilities of mobile phones.

Secondly

, the people can

travel

any

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

remote part of the world using various modes of transportation

such

as improved road, rail and air facilities. Presently, anybody can reach any place in

few days

Suggestion

a few days

, unlike few

Suggestion

, unlike a few

months earlier. In turn,

this

helps in maintaining healthy relationships between family members as they can be physically and mentally available to others.

On the other hand

, families are adopting unhealthy practices both physically and psychologically.

This

is mostly due to the changing

life

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

style

choices accessible for people.

For instance

, people are increasingly dependent on fast food, which is causing conflicts between

elder

advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

and younger family members as there is a disagreement over what is healthy and what unhealthy.

Further

, the present generation is hurrying to reach the financial stability early in their career. With the availability of home and car loans in a quicker way, they are buying houses and cars in a hurried manner.

However

Accept space

this

is putting lots of financial burden on their shoulders and there is always a risk of not re-paying the loan if the job is lost. Elders of

family

Suggestion

the family

families

are against

this

tendency as

this

would put the younger generation under tremendous stress and pressure. To conclude, it can be seen clearly that the plus points of increased family relationships

is seen

Suggestion

are seen

with the positive changes in

communication

and

travel

Also

, people can choose to abandon the junk food as well as their bad financial practices, which is under their control.

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Topic Vocabulary:

geographic separation
economic advancement
technological advancements
face-to-face interactions
egalitarian structures
gender roles
traditional roles
work demands
financial stability
access to education
healthcare
cultural shifts
traditions
cultural identity
family heritage

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