The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
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The pie diagram analyzes residential, industrial, and agricultural
water
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conduct rates in three regions, namely
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Diego
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County,
California
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, and the
world
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. In
California
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and
San
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Diego
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, residential
water
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use
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has increased significantly, at 60% and 39%, respectively.
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, only a small fraction of 8% in other parts of the
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is used by the household.
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, when cultivation
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for 69% of the
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's
water
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use
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, the opposite trend can be seen.
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, in
San
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Diego
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and
California
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, 17% and 28% are accounted for. For industrial
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, all three countries
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the same amount of
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.
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, the
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use
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in
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Diego
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and the rest of the
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is balanced, with 23%. And
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,
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usage increased by 10% to 33%.
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, suburban
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use
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accounts for the highest level in the country of
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Diego
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, and the country uses less
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for farming. Invariance, most of the
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's
water
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use
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is used for agriculture, plus,
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use
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in the private category is
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reduced. Clearly,
California
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is almost equal in terms of
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resources for three categories of residents, industry, and agriculture.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, san, diego, california, world, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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