The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie diagram analyzes residential, industrial, and agricultural
water
conduct rates in three regions, namely
San
Diego
County,
California
, and the
world
. In
California
and
San
Diego
, residential
water
use
has increased significantly, at 60% and 39%, respectively.
In contrast
, only a small fraction of 8% in other parts of the
world
is used by the household.
In addition
, when cultivation
estimates
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for 69% of the
world
's
water
use
, the opposite trend can be seen.
Nevertheless
, in
San
Diego
and
California
, 17% and 28% are accounted for. For industrial
water
, all three countries
use
the same amount of
water
.
Besides
, the
water
use
in
San
Diego
and the rest of the
world
is balanced, with 23%. And
then
,
California
usage increased by 10% to 33%.
Overall
, suburban
water
use
accounts for the highest level in the country of
San
Diego
, and the country uses less
water
for farming. Invariance, most of the
world
's
water
use
is used for agriculture, plus,
water
use
in the private category is
also
reduced. Clearly,
California
is almost equal in terms of
water
resources for three categories of residents, industry, and agriculture.
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  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
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