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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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 most nations in the world, the number of the little-aged men and women who read newspapers or watch the news on TV, are decreasing due to some reasons. The reasons of
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 phenomenon in my point of view are, the spreading of the
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use
 of social media and means of communication represented in
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the internet
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, because of the change of interests of
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 generation comparing to previous
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generation's
 interests. Political issues had become no longer significant as it was before at the decades. Social media and its means have been
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widely circulated or diffused
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wide-spread
 ultimately
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 the recent years.
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 affected the way of thinking of the young persons and their reactions towards everything around them especially policy and community issues. The difference
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 the schooling techniques had been
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evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
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 affected the way of thinking and interests of them resulted in their avoidance of all classical traditional news exposure like newspapers and TV. The feasible solutions
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 issue in my point of view are, to start
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 encouraging the pupils and students at the primary and preparatory stages on reading and show them the importance of reading and its good impact on both the individual and society. Conduct contests and races concerning the measurement of the reading capability of individuals to support the idea of the importance of reading on each
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person's
 life. To sum up, I can say that, it's a great challenge in between recent and
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 generations to convince the youngsters of the great significance of reading in the development and progress of nations all over the world.

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