Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
Most offenders in the world
today
tend to commit crime
again after break
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the break
prison
. There are many causes of this
situation but
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situation, but
this
problem. This
essay will examine these causes and possible solutions before drawing a reasonable conclusion.
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crimes
Firstly
, penalties are not enough strong for prisoners
so criminals commit Suggestion
the prisoners
further
crimes as soon as they are released from prison
. One good illustration of this
, today
in Turkey, prisons have quite comfortable conditions such
as accessible warm
water, air conditioner or delicious foods. Accept comma addition
accessible, warm
Secondly
, killers and thefts commit again crime
after go
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goes
prison
due to lack of advanced rehabilitation. For instance
, it can be seen that range of crime
decreased the lowest proportions in the USA after psychologic
rehabilitation mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
centers
allocate in prisons. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
Thus
, the government should be prudent about the proportion of crime
and range of repeat of crimes.
On the other hand
, there are a variety of possible solutions for decreasing re-commit crime
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crimes
a crime
such
as to improve education, make stronger punishments or skilled staff in prisons. Although
available teachers and psychologists in prisons they are not enough to solve this
problem. Therefore
, government
should allocate more skilled person for prisons and prisoners. Suggestion
the government
For example
, according to a report published by the New York Times, prisons which
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prisons, which
centers
in order to reduce an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
crime
rates are more effective than others concerning the to prevent crime
. Furthermore
, prisons
conditions ought to have either negative conditions or educational. Even though these solutions Suggestion
prison
sometimes be
perilous on prisoners’ psychology they are necessary in order to decrease Suggestion
sometimes are
crime
range which is commited
by bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
connected
old
prisoners.
To sum up, after decades of speculation, Suggestion
older
today
majority of justice ministries have fairly accurate information concerning the criminals and their further
crimes. Many offenders today
have tendency
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a tendency
the tendency
commit
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committing
crime
released from prison
. However
, there are many possible solutions to tackle these problems.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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