In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

Is

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

for a year between finishing high school and starting

university

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study

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wast

spend thoughtlessly; throw away

waste

waist

of time and

unbeneficial

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? While some of people believe that, I am of the opinion that it has tremendous benefits. In

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essay, I will

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discuss how it will

enahnce

increase

enhance

students

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students'

student's

personallity

the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual

personality

,

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, I will

disucss

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

how it can help them studying what they want in the

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.

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with, travelling for a year before starting

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studies can help students to improve their

personallity

the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual

personality

personalities

and communication skills.

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is due to the face that they will meet new people from different cultures and face new cases that they may have never faced before.

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, they most likely will

gain better

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gain a better life

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experience than students who did not travel.

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, research from the

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of Jordan showed that students who travel during the summer that

bewteen

internal to, involving members of (a group of people)

between

finishing school and starting

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have better

life

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skills than who did not. To clarify, travelling has

wonerful

extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier

wonderful

pros

ordinary writing as distinguished from verse

prose

,

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as it can help

student

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students

a student

the student

to enhance their

life

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skills.

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, travelling can help students to gain some

money

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, which may help them to complete their bachelor

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. In fact, studying some majors

are

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is

extremely expensive, which lead many students who do not have enough

money

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to

study

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a subject that different than their favourite one because of

money

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.

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, a report from a local television station called Al Jazeera illustrated that more than 30% of the student who are studying in the Jordanian universities, are studying a course that they did not want from the start, but they did not have the required

money

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that allows them to

study

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what they want. Clearly,

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feature may allow you collect some

money

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that may help you complete your favourite

university

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degree. To conclude, I am convinced that allowing students to travel after completing their secondary studies has remarkable advantages. It can make them better

people wich

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people, which

people which

allow them to face the

life

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in a better way.

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, it could help them to collect some

money

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to start studying their desired

university

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course.