Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the past decades, the rampant

crime

has been provoked

considerably

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considerable

.

Although

imprisonment

are commonly believed

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is commonly believed

to be

most appropriate

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more appropriate

effort to restrict the phenomenon in many countries, education has been concerned to be more effective. In my opinion, despite the potential advantages of

equiping

the act of equiping with weapons in preparation for war

equipping

better education, the benefits of prison sentence outweigh the other. On the one hand, it is widely adopted that lack of

eduaction

the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill

education

usually directly leads to potential

crime

. Many may argue that the more people provided moral norms and knowledge, the less

rate

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the rate

of committing

crime

.

This

argument could be true to some extent. In fact, being brought up with ethics could form a person to follow the rules which limits the chance of violating the laws.

However

, the willing to commit the law needs to be nipped in the bud and the educational approach could not ensure the lower rate of

recommitment

the act of getting recruits; enlisting people for the army (or for a job or a cause etc.)

recruitment

.

For instance

, the crimes usually take the re-education unconsciously, likely to offence and back to the old illegal life.

On the other hand

, it is essential to take into account that

imprisonment

has been preferred for its undeniable,

unrejectable

not capable of being foretold

unpredictable

benefits. The

imprisonment

is the penalty that not only keep the criminals to harm the

society but

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society, but

also

give

opportunity

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an opportunity

the opportunity

of remorse as a humanitarian punishment.

Furthermore

, the fear of losing freedom and spending life in prison is an effective means of determent which is a burden to potential criminals to recommit the

crime

.

For example

, towards the dangerous criminals or in special

circumstances

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circumstances, such

such

as deeply violating the laws,

imprisonment

has always been prioritized in many countries. Taking all above mentioned fact into account, it is clear that the benefits of re-educational approach bring positive effects on criminal;

however

,

this

method is eclipsed by the advantages of

imprisonment

.