Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people assume that unskilled

labors

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

labours

should have the same level of income as those who has a college degree. I totally disagree with the notion because a diploma demands from a person years of education as well as investing money, time and mental efforts in order to complete it.

First

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, highly paid jobs as surgeons or entrepreneurs should be paid

accordingly

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because these professionals carry huge responsibility and their mistakes can cost lives or

multimillion

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businesses. Due to these reasons, they have to spend years of studying and practicing, while manual jobs do not need

this

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kind of effort.

Thus

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, it would be ridiculous to pay equal salaries to those who is putting a lot of efforts and resources in order to be able to perform their jobs and those who is not.

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, if physical workers would be paid on equal footing with qualified professionals,

latter

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the latter

would

lost

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lose

their motivation to pursue their positions.

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, the economy would be in urgent demand of professionals. As well as

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this, high education

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higher education, this

this, higher education

is expensive and many graduates have

student’s

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student

loans, which have to be paid off.

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, their earnings should take into account their expenses.

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, I have spent 6 years for my degree and I would be discouraged and frustrated if it did not bring any compensation. In conclusion, the idea of equal

payment

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pay

for physical

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

and

high

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highly

-educated workers is not possible. In my opinion, skilled jobs should be rewarded higher compared with unqualified jobs, because they demand time, money and a lot of effort to be ready for them.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

266 words

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Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

you are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. in your letter explain: why you cannot pay the rent; when you will pay the rent; how you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future.

The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate parents about good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?