In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Graduating from high
school
is the
first
time where a teenager can decide on his
next
step in life. In some
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
cultures
, students continue directly to the university to pursue a degree, while in other countries,
such
as Sweden and Israel, young people are encouraged to have some time off before starting
collage
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
. There are several advantages in applying to the university directly after
school
.
students
Suggestion
Students
who continue their education directly from high
school
are still
knowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
with the studied material,
such
as
histroy
the aggregate of past events
history
and mathematics, and can continue their education directly without the need to familiarize
themselvs
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
with the previously studied
corriculum
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
.
This
is
in contrast
to students who took a break, in order to work or travel, and have
forgoten
not noticed inadvertently
forgotten
most of the studied material. As a consequence, they need to read most of the studied material again in order to continue their education.
Also
, students who continue directly to
collage
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
are
use
Suggestion
used
to sit and concentrate for long periods of times, a trait which is lost if people do not maintain it regularly. Despite the above mentioned, there are many disadvantages in pursuing a degree straight from high
school
. Young adults, who finish high
school
are not aware of the different opportunities in the
buisness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
market and,
as a result
, do not know what are the
dirrefent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
kinds of professions. To illustrate, if a young person did not go and worked in a bank, he will not know what is the
dirrence
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
between a
buisness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
business'
development agent and a
finiacial
involving financial matters
financial
consultant.
Furthermore
, there are many professions,
such
as medicine or joining the army, in which studying duration is very long.
Commiting
Suggestion
Committing
Commenting
to
this
line of work without having a break to work or travel might
leed
a soft heavy toxic malleable metallic element; bluish white when freshly cut but tarnishes readily to dull grey
lead
to many frustrations. In conclusion, I believe
stuying
stay the same; remain in a certain state
staying
studying
is of the
atmost
of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity
utmost
outmost
importance and should be
encourged
inspired with confidence
encouraged
. The
timming
the time when something happens
timing
trimming
timings
, whoever is individual and depend on our wishes an profession we choose to pursue.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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