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. Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion

#people #gadgets #phones #laptops
A few
peoplelike
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people like
 to buy new technological gadgets
such
 as phones and laptops.
This
 is a positive development as it broadens the knowledge of people and
bridhes
a structure that allows people or vehicles to cross an obstacle such as a river or canal or railway etc.
bridges
 the generation gap. These points are
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to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
 in detail in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. Few people are passionate about buying new things like laptops and phones. It saves their time to do
work
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the work
. They work online while sitting at home. With the new advancement of technology, they get the knowledge about updates on phones. Which provide
abundance
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an abundance
 of facilities in their hands. It has a great role in providing education to those students who live in remote areas and attain higher education from a top class university while sitting at their home with the help of smartphones and laptops.
Consequently
, buying new gadgets is beneficial to get knowledge. To reinforce it
further
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of people
 to buy new phones and
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laptops is
 that it eliminates the generation gap because in modern era everyone knows to cope with new technology. To clarify it in a better way, nowadays, older people are using smartphones to talk to their offsprings.
As a result
, smartphones are increasing the family bonding because people can connect with their
family
Suggestion
families
 while living far away. To conclude, people like to buy new technology as it saves their time and minimise the generation gap among
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people, which
 is a positive development for individuals as well as a nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology advancements
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • status symbol
  • financial burden
  • obsession
  • impulsive
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • e-waste
  • environmentally friendly
  • second-hand market
  • repairability
  • upgradability
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