re;gtrb tytry tr ytrtrytr yuytu ty tyutyu tyuty utyu ty uty

#re #gtrb #tytry #tr #ytrtrytr #yuytu #ty #tyutyu #tyuty #utyu #uty

Dear Mike, How is it going buddy? I haven't seen you for about 2 years. I'm glad to hear that you have finished your high school. I know that it is a turning point in your life, but I think it's better to search for a job.

Firstly

, you won't enjoy going to college, because you will have to waste a lot of time studying and you need money to be independent

first

then

you can apply for a college. It's important to have practical experience in some fields to be aware of your needs.

Secondly

, having a job makes you collect money and beside that you deal with different kinds of people. You

also

can practice English during working and

that is

a perfect chance to improve your language.

Finally

, I know you have interests in marketing and design, so I suggest that you apply for jobs that require dealing with food products and fashion. You can start your career early. You only will need to attend some courses to start your work. If I were you, I will prepare my C.V. As soon as possible. I hope my advice can help you. If you have any questions. Please don't hesitate to contact me. Love, Hussein

Submitted by Hussein on Sat Aug 03 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

207 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?
In most metropolises, there is not enough community spirit as individuals barely keep in touch with each other compared to rural areas. We can witness several reasons for this tendency with some solutions.
6
band
Some social media marketing’s biggest attraction is that it helps brands to meet a larger online audience. Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family.
In many parts of the world, businesses are owned and run by families. Its usual contributors include close relatives who handle the resources and finances of an organization. There are some benefits associated with a family business, but there are also some drawbacks associated with undertaking a business venture with the family.
6.5
band
85.Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that many nations improve their living standard through economic progress. This essay would argue that despite it can create job opportunities, individuals forget their ethical values, which means that the advantages do not outweigh the drawbacks.
5
band
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that during a visit to foreign land one must copy how people of there wear and act whereas others show their dissatisfaction saying that the prime nation has to accept the culture of other countries. This essay below will discuss both speculations along with my opinion.
7
band
More and more people are buying ready to eat food instead of cooking themselves. Does this development has more advantages or more disadvantages.
Getting adequate nutrition in today`s busy life is crucial to maintain health. Nowadays people are purchasing ready-made foods rather cooking at home. It has somewhat more advantages than disadvantages which I am going to explain in this essay.

re;gtrb tytry tr ytrtrytr yuytu ty tyutyu tyuty utyu ty uty

Fully explain your ideas

In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

Some social media marketing’s biggest attraction is that it helps brands to meet a larger online audience. Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family.

85.Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

More and more people are buying ready to eat food instead of cooking themselves. Does this development has more advantages or more disadvantages.