IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

re;gtrb tytry tr ytrtrytr yuytu ty tyutyu tyuty utyu ty uty

#re #gtrb #tytry #tr #ytrtrytr #yuytu #ty #tyutyu #tyuty #utyu #uty
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Mike, How is it going buddy? I haven't seen you for about 2 years. I'm glad to hear that you have finished your high school. I know that it is a turning point in your life, but I think it's better to search for a job.
Firstly
, you won't enjoy going to college, because you will have to waste a lot of time studying and you need money to be independent
first
then
 you can apply for a college. It's important to have practical experience in some fields to be aware of your needs.
Secondly
, having a job makes you collect money and beside that you deal with different kinds of people. You
also
 can practice English during working and
that is
 a perfect chance to improve your language.
Finally
, I know you have interests in marketing and design, so I suggest that you apply for jobs that require dealing with food products and fashion. You can start your career early. You only will need to attend some courses to start your work. If I were you, I will prepare my C.V. As soon as possible. I hope my advice can help you. If you have any questions. Please don't hesitate to contact me. Love, Hussein
Submitted by Hussein on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: