Should government fund public transport so as to be free for those who are using it? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Government making means of transportation open to the masses for easy use without any monetary value attached to it. The above will be both discussed as to the merits and demerits, but with more reasons to disagree.

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with, roads are the most common way of movement

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to others like railway, airport and seaport. They are not just used for

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purpose, but can

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be as an avenue to generate funds for other project by the government for the benefit of the people. If they are without the fee attached, there will be a lot of depreciation in the monitoring and maintenance of the regular things that need to be done.

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, taxes paid by the commuters which are allocated to the transport fare are used to fix problems developed on the roads

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like potholes), amendment and creation of more traffic light, zebra crossing and expanding of roads for easy usage. Above all, funds earned can

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be channeled to other projects like creating employment for some individual for the care of the roads with good income.

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, making transit without pay would help in reducing some hazards.

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, when car users resolve in making advantageous use of the free transportation, there will be less cars plying the community which in turn would help with reduction in air pollution and

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will

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help with the health of the masses. There is

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a reduction in traffic, improving workplaces as staffs will get to their place of assignment early; monitoring and keeping track of individual would be made easy. In conclusion, payment attached to government funded means of conveyance is not wholly a bad idea as it can be used for the upkeep and preservation of thoroughfare

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to funding other projects.

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However making

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the thing named or in question

at no cost will encourage less

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cars, thereby

causing

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a reduction

in air

pollution which

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pollution, which

is highly disadvantageous to the environs at large

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