These days many countries help other countries by giving them free food, medical, or other aid. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this counties that give and receive?

There is no doubt that international cooperation is one of the main goals of every government. While it can be beneficial for both volunteers that embrace
this
mission and undeveloped countries that consider
this
help as a source of livelihood, is necessary to believe that the risk to overpass the other freedom might be a problem for these populations. One obvious advantage of international aid is that it is beneficial for the development of countries that can have the opportunity to receive the primary goods in order to survive
.
Accept space
.
This
is the case of countries which are subjected to war or natural calamities,
for instance
floodings and earthquakes.
Secondly
, it is constructive
also
for volunteers that decide to help these populations.
This
supports them to
aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
the sense of being useful for people that are less lucky.
For
example people
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example, people
that had spent part of their time doing an activity of
voluntering
tell voluntarily
volunteering
are more likely to be
satisfy
Suggestion
satisfied
of their life because they appreciate the minor aspects and joys that the
existence
Suggestion
existing
reserve to us,
for instance
the smile of a child
that is
delighted
remove or make invisible
deleted
due to the fact that he had the opportunity to receive a good education or to read a book.
On the other hand
, when humanitarian aid represents only a profitable activity for the government of developed countries it can have some disadvantages. Some population, namely indigenous tribes
considers
Suggestion
consider
this
aid as a violation of their freedom, of their traditions and cultures and perceive foreign people as conquerors. In conclusion, despite the fact that some governments can overtake their role in the international cooperation, both countries who give and receive cooperation might obtain various benefits, not only in material items but
also
in the acquisition of significant values in one’s life.
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