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Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons.

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I am writing
this
 letter regarding ask for private Spanish lessons for my son. He is learning Spanish as a
second
 language at college, but he needs some extra lessons. My son has missed a term of Spanish lessons due to illness and he needs to catch up with the same stage where other students are at the moment. He is very good at it, which will guarantee that he will rapidly take in the extra lessons. We are looking for an experienced teacher who knows the education exams. His academy has been using the same method that an international institution uses to teach students for university exams. So, the professional we are interested has to have large experience and methodology applied on
this
 side of teaching. He is available for private lessons at home any weekday after his normal class. I look forward to hearing about your professional experience. Yours sincerely,
Submitted by fernando.llisboa on

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