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Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.

#people #tv #advertisements
There is a belief that
TV
 ads are beneficial,
however
, there is
opposite viewpoint
Suggestion
an opposite viewpoint
 of
this
. There are two sides of
this
 statement and I will discuss both points in
this
 essay. I will start to look at advantages of
TV
 adverts. People who support ads often mention that by watching ads you can get a lot of positive information about items which can be useful for you
such
 as economic or data about
quality
Suggestion
the quality
.
Furthermore
, it makes People to complete their business or work easily. Due to fact that the ads often offer a chance to book, buy or sell something.
On the other hand
, people who against to
TV
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
 say that advertising causes them to be annoyed. What is more is that it influence
people especially
Accept comma addition
people, especially
 youngsters or children to buy unnecessary things. People
also
 claim that advertisements on
TV
 are a lot.
Consequently
, people have to waste their time by watching them In conclusion, I assume that
although
 the ads are a part of
TV
 system due to business, they are limited by the state

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