Labour saving devices such as dishwasher and communication tools such as computer are supposed to make our lives easier. Some people argue that these devices only make them difficulty Does modren technology reduce or increase stress?

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It is true that advanced technology

have brought

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has brought

revolution for human beings that have made lives easier on

this

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planet. Household device

such

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as dishwasher saves both money and time effectively and communication gadgets

such

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as computers are bringing people closer. Though, some people opine that these machines are increasing problems for people.

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, these devices, in fact, are eradicating severe obstacles and providing

stressfree

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stress free

life in general. Unlike

past time

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the past time

when people hired person for performing household tasks, now people have numerous options to purchase

householding

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device

such

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as dishwasher which saves the both labour and time. Because these devices

are not only work

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are not only working

does not only work

do not only work

have not only worked

round the

clock but

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clock, but

also

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complete the

task

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independetly

on your own; without outside help

independently

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, some household devices are

avaiable

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

at reasonable price and everyone can afford easily. The cost of

dishwasher

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dishwasher, for

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example is

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example, is

10 times less than

average wage

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the average wage

of home

servent

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, modern

technologies

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technology

tools are making people’s life easier than ever because they are saving labour expenditure.

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Nevertheless others

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Nevertheless, others

devices

such

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as smartphones are being used for communicating; Computers are

indespensible

not to be dispensed with; essential

indispensable

for human beings and best for

communucation

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

communication

communications

because computers are playing a key to make

world

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the world

closer by providing various options of communication.

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, there are numerous computer softwares

such

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skype

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Skype

, Yahoo messenger are available for communication

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one place to others where people can

conatct

close interaction

contact

connect

instantenly

without any delay

instantaneously

and can express their ideas which can reduce the isolation among society.

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, a recent report indicates that isolation among individuals have been

plungged

thrust or throw into

plunged

belonged

plugged

to a large extent with the help of computer as now people are doing conservation

frequenlty

many times at short intervals

frequently

with their family members or relatives on the computers. To sum up, apparently, modern devices are

boon

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a boon

for

people and

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people, and

these devices are beneficial for increasing the productivity of life. For

houshold

a social unit living together

household

task

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diswasher

a machine for washing dishes

dishwasher

dish-washer

device

perform

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performs

task

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accurately and in order to make contact with

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

person

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person's

computers

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computer

are the best tool to do

this

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activity.

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, I personally believe that modern technology is reducing stress and making

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task

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the task

easier

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Labour saving devices such as dishwasher and communication tools such as computer are supposed to make our lives easier. Some people argue that these devices only make them difficulty Does modren technology reduce or increase stress?

Your opinion

Topic -"Prevention is better than a cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

Some people say that your first impressions when you meet someone are always right. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this ?