Labour saving devices such as dishwasher and communication tools such as computer are supposed to make our lives easier. Some people argue that these devices only make them difficulty Does modren technology reduce or increase stress?

It is true that advanced technology
have brought
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has brought
revolution for human beings that have made lives easier on
this
planet. Household device
such
as dishwasher saves both money and time effectively and communication gadgets
such
as computers are bringing people closer. Though, some people opine that these machines are increasing problems for people.
However
, these devices, in fact, are eradicating severe obstacles and providing
stressfree
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stress free
life in general. Unlike
past time
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the past time
when people hired person for performing household tasks, now people have numerous options to purchase
householding
device
such
as dishwasher which saves the both labour and time. Because these devices
are not only work
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are not only working
does not only work
do not only work
have not only worked
round the
clock but
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clock, but
also
complete the
task
independetly
on your own; without outside help
independently
.
Moreover
, some household devices are
avaiable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
at reasonable price and everyone can afford easily. The cost of
dishwasher
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dishwasher, for
for
example is
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example, is
10 times less than
average wage
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the average wage
of home
servent
.
Consequently
, modern
technologies
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technology
tools are making people’s life easier than ever because they are saving labour expenditure.
Nevertheless others
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Nevertheless, others
devices
such
as smartphones are being used for communicating; Computers are
indespensible
not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
for human beings and best for
communucation
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
because computers are playing a key to make
world
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the world
closer by providing various options of communication.
Moreover
, there are numerous computer softwares
such
as
skype
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Skype
, Yahoo messenger are available for communication
to
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in
one place to others where people can
conatct
close interaction
contact
connect
instantenly
without any delay
instantaneously
and can express their ideas which can reduce the isolation among society.
For example
, a recent report indicates that isolation among individuals have been
plungged
thrust or throw into
plunged
belonged
plugged
to a large extent with the help of computer as now people are doing conservation
frequenlty
many times at short intervals
frequently
with their family members or relatives on the computers. To sum up, apparently, modern devices are
boon
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a boon
for
people and
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people, and
these devices are beneficial for increasing the productivity of life. For
houshold
a social unit living together
household
task
diswasher
a machine for washing dishes
dishwasher
dish-washer
device
perform
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performs
task
accurately and in order to make contact with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
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person's
computers
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computer
are the best tool to do
this
activity.
Thus
, I personally believe that modern technology is reducing stress and making
task
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the task
easier

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