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The line graph depicts the rate of young British, who prefer eating vegetarian food spanning over the past 50 year period. Obviously, we can clearly see that in 1960, young people did not have quality. And
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20 years, the number of modern vegetarians rose sharply in 1980 and reached its peak (more than 15%). After a gradual decline in the
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10 years, the rate of abandonment of British teenagers from meat fluctuated between 1990 and 2000, around 6%. At 1995,
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ratio reached its lowest point, slightly below 5%. Since
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, the number of younger who have changed their habits and become vegetarians has been increasing moderately until now. These percentages are expected to tend to be slightly flat and
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grow. In general, teen vegetarians tend to be discovered in 1960 and were very popular in 1980. Since
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