overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle this problem

Overpopulation is the biggest
problem
that many metropolitan around the world are facing. It causes huge problems to
urban area
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urban areas
an urban area
, both in physical and social aspects so it should to have mitigation to solve
this
problem
which I will suggest in
this
essay below.
Firstly
, the numerous of people flows only in the capital
city
, causing a quick derogation to the
city
's physical
environtment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
aspect,
such
as a traffic congestion led the air pollution, poor waste management.
Moreover
, the numerous people' needs are higher than
a
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an
existing
city
services, which causing a lack of
neccessary
absolutely essential
necessary
services, especially in
city's infrastructure
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the city's infrastructure
.
Secondly
, social aspects
also
have many serious
problem
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problems
, but the
obviously
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obvious
issue is inequality in our society. Even the main
city
provides a lot of chances to people, whether best salary
,
Accept space
,
job, and a good quality of life, but for
special people group
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the special people group
special people groups
a special people group
, which including disabilities, elderly, and women, they are ignored
from
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by
government and
also
cut their chance to have
better quality
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a better quality
of life they should be.
Finally
, We should consider about overpopulation
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
both physical and social
problem
,
Therefore
,
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should aware and create policy to limit the number of migrants from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
area to urban.
Furthermore
, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
has to prepare enough infrastructure and services for coping
this
problem
in the long term.
Moreover
, they
should to invest
Suggestion
should invest
more
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
district which
Accept comma addition
district, which
creates new jobs in
rural area
Suggestion
rural areas
because it can
attarct
direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attract
people to stay and find their job in their hometown.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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