Should governments make decisions about people's lifestyle or should people make their own decisions

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Decision making has a vital role in everybody's
life
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a school of thought
argues that,it
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, argues that it
is the
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of higher authorities to take decisions about one's way of
life
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.
while
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other school of thought believes that
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it is the sole responsibility of
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the individual
individual
.
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analaysis
someone who is skilled at analyzing data
analysts
whose responsibility
is making
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are making
decision regarding
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life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
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On the one hand
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it is argued by many people that authorities should take decisions regarding
life
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style
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because it aids the well being of a society.
In other words
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,
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,
in
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modern world people are facing a lot of problems in their
life
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like health problems and lack of nutritional food.
Hence
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,
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if government makes decisions about
people
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people, life
life
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style
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,
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it can hamper
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this issues
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this issue
these issues
.
For instance
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many countries people should pay a lion share of
there
of them or themselves
their
income as tax.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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government
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the government
canuse
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can use
this
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amount for the basic need of a nation.
Also
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have
strignent
demanding strict attention to rules and procedures
stringent
rules for family planning and housing.
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for it ensure the well being of a nation
On the other hand
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it is said by many people that decision making about
life
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style
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is right of a person because
then
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only he can achieve his goals.To be more specific
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diperent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
people have
different aim
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different aims
a different aim
and tastes.
As a
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result people
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result, people
will always choose a
dicision
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
division
discussion
accourding
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
to their interest and it ensure them to achieve their task.
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most of
artist
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the artist
are succesful because of they followed their
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is successful because they followed their
is successful because of they followed their
are successful because of they followed their
own decisions To conclude
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after analysing both views it is clear that
goverment
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the government
government
and
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have
equel
having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equal
importance in
this
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scenario.Because
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
dcisions
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
are for
wellbeing
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the wellbeing
well being
of
nation whereas
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the nation, whereas
the nation whereas
a nation whereas
nations whereas
indivitual
a human being
individual
dicision
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
division
decisions
helps to achieve goals

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