Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, governments pay partly or all education fees. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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There are different views about the government should pay some or all of education fees. In
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opinion
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Opinion
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refers to the speaker or writer
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ones: the government should pay all the education fees. We probably know that school funded by the government can relieve
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male possessive pronoun
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burden for
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afluent
having an abundant supply of money or possessions of value
affluent
effluent
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The family
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is concerned
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, to social, illiteracy rate will be reduced
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bestow a quality on
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increasing
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is very advantageous to our country. In conclusion, my own view is that the
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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • access to education
  • financial burden
  • education quality
  • equal opportunities
  • investment in human capital
  • economic development
  • cost burden
  • misuse of funds
  • motivation
  • perform well
  • limited choice
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