It is generally believed that people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is generally revealed that some people are birth with certain skills
such
as sports or music
and others are not. But sometimes seen that any child can be taught to become a good sportsman or musician. So I will discuss both aspects and give my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
Some people are born with certain talents like sports and music
. It is given by God. So they mostly show their interest in sports activities and music
. For example
,
singers mostly increase their talent with Accept space
,
music
because they have more knowledge
about the singing. They are doing more practice on singing lines. So one day
they become a good singer. Secondly
, some children show their interest in medical lines so they are on medical subjects because theynt
to become doctors. So that they mostly keep maintain their certain talents.
have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined
tend
However
, some children have do not knowledge
about the sports activities and music
. So they get knowledge
about it from the personal trainers. Moreover
, sometimes they are joining in the games. So they get more information. So children do hard work on it. Moreover
, they faced many problems in sport activities, but day
by day
they become good sportsmanship. They get information about the punctuality, discipline and honesty from the sports activities. Consequently
, some children create their interest in the music
line so that children get knowledge
about the singing. They learn about the knowledge
such
as music
instruments and quotes about singing.
In conclusion, some children are birth with talented skills so it is beneficial for them. But some students are getting knowledge
about the sports and music
so when children doing hard work to fulfil their dreams so one day
they get success in our life.Submitted by Gurpreet on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite