A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same right as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
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modern world, the perspectives of how best to treat animals differ among people. While some think that animals should be treated equally as humans and have similar rights, others opine that humans use animals in terms of meeting their diverse needs
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as food and research.
This
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essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
both views and provide an opinion. On the one hand, proponents of animal exploitation argue that humans are the most important earthly creatures. If ensuring the survival of human race means experimenting on as more animals as possible,
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this
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should be done.
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An example
of
such
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opinion can be seen in various research laboratories all over the world where drug testing is
initially
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done on animals before human trials are carried out. Should these
animals not
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animals, not
respond positively to these experimental trials, they are not carried out on human beings.
This
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example clearly shows that human beings are more superior than animals and
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subject to exploitation.
On the other hand
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, those who think animals have equal right as humans opine that most of the reasons for predating on these animals are unnecessary. They argue,
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, that most of the essential food nutrients needed by humans can be derived from fruits and
vegetables which
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vegetables, which
have even been scientifically proven to be more beneficial than animal products. To illustrate, in 2010, the Guardian newspaper, which is a reputable news magazine in Nigeria, published a study, carried out by the Nigerian Medical Association, to access the risk of cardiovascular disease among vegans and non-vegans. The study showed that there was
double risk
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a double risk
the double risk
of developing cardiovascular disease among non-vegans when compared to their vegan counterparts who consumed more of plant product.
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, it is clear that human beings do not compulsorily have to feed on animals. To conclude,
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some people argue that using animals for food and research can be considered ethical. I am of the opinion that both animals and humans can have an enduring symbiotic relationship which will ultimately benefit both ends. It is
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hoped that steps will be taken to improve the rights of animals to ensure continuity of
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race.
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