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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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There are many programs organised by schools and one of them is an international student exchange program through which one country's student visiting another country and exchange many things like education, culture, hobbies and so on. The motive of the program is to exchange the culture, education, language and behaviour which are happening in
this
 program. Some of the students are not so rich to bear the expense of international visits. And that's why it will be beneficial for all the students. International student comes with their culture and music. Some or other way, I do not see any disadvantages of these programs. So for me, it's good to have these programs.

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