Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I do agree to a certain extent that Reading is more educational over watching TV or videos as over the period of time, Reading helps in
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getting higher or more vigorous
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concentration of an individual which co-
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helps in other aspects of life too. Not only
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, Inculcation of reading habit helps improve the vocabulary and
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helps
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fasten
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the vision. Watching videos or Tv can impact the eyes and
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, if one is listening to them over earphones, they can be harmful for ears. While reading, one should take care of proper lighting and maintain an adequate distance between
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the eyes
and the papers.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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