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Space exploration costs taxpayers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantage of spending money on space exploration?

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Each year Taxpayers spend a lot of money to supply the
space
exploration
 indirectly. In my opinion a crucial advantage is the advantages which come from accomplishment of new technologies, and other industries following them, but as a disadvantage perspective, the exerted incomes of that cannot be an observable thing for taxpayers. Yearly, taxpayers spend a lot of money, which supply the
space
exploration
. The
space
exploration
consider
Suggestion
considers
 as an action which have not impact on people daily routine performance, and people would like to find tangible reaction from
amount
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the amount
 of tax that spend.
For example
, when the government
make
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makes
 a highway,
this
 fact is considered by people to have corresponding with the
annually
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annual
 tax, but some development in a country cannot have a sensation
such
 as
space
exploration
. In a year, taxpayers devote a cost of
space
exploration
. As a great outcome of
this
 activity, should say investigation in high technologies being
space
exploration
, will
followed
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follow
 by other advancement which comes into other national or international industries, and
this
 matter leads to new evolution in economic and health.
For instance
, new technologies that can explore the depth of the
space
, now are using to predict the weather. In Conclusion,
although
 it is thought by some that paying the tax for
space
exploration
 has not
benefit
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benefited
 in their life, but I believe that it would be more helpful
to
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for
 development of national and international industries even make more convenient in our life.
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