Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Parents are the people who, teach their children to be good in
this
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community
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, but some others keep trust on schools. Mostly people blame parents about their children's behaviours, while others disagree and blame
schools
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the schools
.
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essay agrees that guardians are responsible to bring up a well mannered
child
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to the society.
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Also
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Also, this
this
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essay will discuss both points of view. It is clear that father and mother are
best teachers
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the best teachers
for a
child
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to teach discipline. To be a good
members
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member
of any society the
child
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must obey the rules of their
community
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. It begins from the home and
also
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a
child
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's
first
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best teacher is
mother
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the mother
. Toddlers grasp most of the behaviours and habits quickly from family members because, it is the best time for them. For instant Dr. Maria
montessori
Italian educator who developed a method of teaching mentally handicapped children and advocated a child-centered approach (1870-1952)
Montessori
states that "a
child
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has a
spongeneous
happening or arising without apparent external cause
spontaneous
mind during the period of their age 2 to 5 years.
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However many
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However, many
people disagree
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people disagree with this
this
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statement and believe that popular
school
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can guide children to be good. When a
child
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enter
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enters
into a
school
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,
child
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has to face different kinds of pupils
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as pupils from different countries, pupils with different mother tongue....... . Whatever a
child
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grasped from home will apply in
school
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, and develop those habits.
For example
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, in most countries children start
school
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in their age of 5 or 6. During
early childhood period
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the early childhood period
the
child
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spent time with family members and absorbed all their
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
and try to apply in
school
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. In conclusion, parents are the responsible people to bring up a good member
for
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of
a country and schools can help parents to achieve
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. Not only the
school
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, members of the
community
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also
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should help
younger generation
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the younger generation
to become valuable members
to
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of
the
community
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through out
all the way through
throughout
their life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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