It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development?
Statistics data
have shown
that in the near future, old people will constitute the majority of the Suggestion
showed
show
population
in some countries and there will be a lower percentage of young people compared to older population
. I strongly believe that this
is a negative development and it will have many detrimental effects on society
and people.
Some people argue that in a society
with more young
adults, authorities should spend more budget on education, so if there will be less young people in the country, less grant will be devoted to education and they believe that Suggestion
younger
this
development will be beneficial for economy
. Suggestion
the economy
Nevertheless
, I think older
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the older population
population
bring
extra costs for Suggestion
brings
society
. For example
, in a country with many old people, government should subsidize many healthcare
programs, Suggestion
health care
such
as retirement houses and health insurance companies.
It is obvious that younger people are more creative and innovative than elders, so they can run many local businesses which will boost the economy
. In a country with lack
of creative ideas, Suggestion
a lack
economy
will deteriorate and Suggestion
the economy
as a result
, no developments will happen in various areas, such
as science or technology. Furthermore
, in this
situation there are many available job positions because workforces are just retired or ineffective. Companies may accept employees from other countries to fulfil their need for young workforce. As a result
, a large proportion of society
will be migrants. Although
these young workforces from other countries are beneficial for society
, by increasing the number of migrants, the ancient culture of the nationality will be gradually forgotten.
To sum up, I believe that more people in old ages is
a detrimental development with many negative effects on the country’s Suggestion
are
economy
. I think governments should introduce long term policies to avoid disruptions in the balance of the population
.Submitted by msharifielts on
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