It is expected in the near future that there will be higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it positive or negative development?

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Has it ever comes to your attention that the number of old people in comparison with
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
in some countries
are increasing
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is increasing
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is a negative
development
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for our future. In
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essay we discuss bad aspects of
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approach. The
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step toward facing these implications would be to take an exact look at
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development
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. It has been argued that each
society
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must have
increasing
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increased
their population to avoid
extinction
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. Beside
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, if the amount of maternity in
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has decreased, our
society
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turns to the old one. To illustrate, according to some statistics decreasing in number of people cases simultaneously
extinction
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of people and languages in some countries. All in all, if
our
plural of "I"
we
older people population increasing, it means that the rate of babies whom born are few.
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, we must avoid
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because it leads us to
extinction
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of humans and some languages.
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, not only is
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development
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negative but
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negative, but
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threating
pose a threat to; present a danger to
threaten
threatening
threatens
our
society
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.
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, each
society
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needs people
whom
the person or persons that; the one that
who
take our
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’s responsibilities.
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, our
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needs some worker whom can work in hard conditions, but old people could not do these works.
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, sometimes these works are essential and we cannot ignore them.
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, as all know, people need retirement
period which
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period, which
they can rest without any concerns.
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purpose would not occur until we could find some people whom could do
same things
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the same things
like them. In conclusion, we could not leave
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
initial works and do not retire old people.
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would not happen until we have a young population for replacement. To sum up, based on aforementioned compelling grounds, increasing in
number
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the number
a number
of old people is
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a negative development
development
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.
This
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trend has dire consequences for our future.
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,
extinction
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and lack of members in workplaces are
consequences
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the consequences
of
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figure
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