It is expected in the near future that there will be higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it positive or negative development?
Has it ever comes to your attention that the number of old people in comparison with
youngers
in some countries used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
are increasing
? Suggestion
is increasing
This
figure
is a negative development
for our future. In this
essay we discuss bad aspects of this
approach.
The first
step toward facing these implications would be to take an exact look at this
development
. It has been argued that each society
must have increasing
their population to avoid Suggestion
increased
extinction
. Beside this
, if the amount of maternity in society
has decreased, our society
turns to the old one. To illustrate, according to some statistics decreasing in number of people cases simultaneously extinction
of people and languages in some countries. All in all, if our
older people population increasing, it means that the rate of babies whom born are few. plural of "I"
we
Likewise
, we must avoid this
figure
because it leads us to extinction
of humans and some languages.
Secondly
, not only is this
development
negative but
Accept comma addition
negative, but
also
threating
our pose a threat to; present a danger to
threaten
threatening
threatens
society
. In addition
, each society
needs people whom
take our the person or persons that; the one that
who
society
’s responsibilities. For instance
, our society
needs some worker whom can work in hard conditions, but old people could not do these works. Moreover
, sometimes these works are essential and we cannot ignore them. In addition
, as all know, people need retirement period which
they can rest without any concerns. Accept comma addition
period, which
This
purpose would not occur until we could find some people whom could do same things
like them. In conclusion, we could not leave Suggestion
the same things
some
initial works and do not retire old people. one or some or every or all without specification
any
Further
, this
figure
would not happen until we have a young population for replacement.
To sum up, based on aforementioned compelling grounds, increasing in number
of old people is Suggestion
the number
a number
negative
Suggestion
a negative development
development
. This
trend has dire consequences for our future. Finally
, extinction
and lack of members in workplaces are consequences
of Suggestion
the consequences
this
figure
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