It is expected in the near future that there will be higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it positive or negative development?

Has it ever comes to your attention that the number of old people in comparison with
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
in some countries
are increasing
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is increasing
?
This
figure
is a negative
development
for our future. In
this
essay we discuss bad aspects of
this
approach. The
first
step toward facing these implications would be to take an exact look at
this
development
. It has been argued that each
society
must have
increasing
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increased
their population to avoid
extinction
. Beside
this
, if the amount of maternity in
society
has decreased, our
society
turns to the old one. To illustrate, according to some statistics decreasing in number of people cases simultaneously
extinction
of people and languages in some countries. All in all, if
our
plural of "I"
we
older people population increasing, it means that the rate of babies whom born are few.
Likewise
, we must avoid
this
figure
because it leads us to
extinction
of humans and some languages.
Secondly
, not only is
this
development
negative but
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negative, but
also
threating
pose a threat to; present a danger to
threaten
threatening
threatens
our
society
.
In addition
, each
society
needs people
whom
the person or persons that; the one that
who
take our
society
’s responsibilities.
For instance
, our
society
needs some worker whom can work in hard conditions, but old people could not do these works.
Moreover
, sometimes these works are essential and we cannot ignore them.
In addition
, as all know, people need retirement
period which
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period, which
they can rest without any concerns.
This
purpose would not occur until we could find some people whom could do
same things
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the same things
like them. In conclusion, we could not leave
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
initial works and do not retire old people.
Further
,
this
figure
would not happen until we have a young population for replacement. To sum up, based on aforementioned compelling grounds, increasing in
number
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the number
a number
of old people is
negative
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a negative development
development
.
This
trend has dire consequences for our future.
Finally
,
extinction
and lack of members in workplaces are
consequences
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the consequences
of
this
figure
.
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