Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both the views and give it opinion.

The earth is surrounded by the
environment
and because of
this
the most important source for a living thing is
environment
and it is
human beings
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the human being's responsibility
human being's responsibility
a human being's responsibility
human beings' responsibility
responsibility
to save
environment
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the environment
.
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.
Many people believe that environmental
protection
responsibility
is upon
government
because they have sufficient power to take any actions
,
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,
rules and making
camps
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camp
for the
protection
purpose.
However
, few people think that society and communities are responsible for making a natural
things
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thing
safer. I strongly support the idea of a governmental
responsibility
for
environment
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the environment
. Many environmental
protectionalists
an advocate of protectionism
protectionists
believe
government
is a capable enough to make a various laws for
protection
purpose.
For example
, the
government
authorities
has
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have
a created a law on a chemical production
factories
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factory
that they should have a pollution with using machines and need to plant more trees in a chemical production areas as it helps to prevent pollution to protect
environment
.
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.
Even
,
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,
authorities
also
took actions on individuals for damaging and cutting trees because trees are very important part of
a
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an
environment
. As an example
,
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,
government
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the government
organised the camp for
environment protecting purpose
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the environment, protecting purpose
the environment protecting purpose
and motivating people to grow more trees.
On the other hand
, human beings are one of the considerable part of
environment
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the environment
.
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.
So, it is individuals
responsibility
to protect natural Sources from a hazardous
things
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thing
such
as, a blazing fire can get a control by immediate human's actions.
Moreover
, not only preventing has hazardous
things but
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things, but
, people
also
can improve and protect their surrounding areas by taking care of it.
For example
, making surrounding area clean and improving
garbage system
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the garbage system
by creating more facilities attracts people to dump rubbish in a dustbin rather in an environmental places like a
gardens
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garden
. Overall, both
plays
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play
an important role
for
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in
protecting
environment but, I
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the environment, but I
the environment but, I
strongly believe that
government
can tackle any environmental things because they have all rights for making
environment
safe. So
,
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,
the major
responsibility
of
environment
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environmental
protection
relay
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relays
on
government
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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