Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both the views and give it opinion.

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The earth is surrounded by the

environment

and because of

this

the most important source for a living thing is

environment

and it is

human beings

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the human being's responsibility

human being's responsibility

a human being's responsibility

human beings' responsibility

responsibility

to save

environment

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the environment

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Many people believe that environmental

protection

responsibility

is upon

government

because they have sufficient power to take any actions

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rules and making

camps

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camp

for the

protection

purpose.

However

, few people think that society and communities are responsible for making a natural

things

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thing

safer. I strongly support the idea of a governmental

responsibility

for

environment

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the environment

. Many environmental

protectionalists

an advocate of protectionism

protectionists

believe

government

is a capable enough to make a various laws for

protection

purpose.

For example

, the

government

authorities

has

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have

a created a law on a chemical production

factories

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factory

that they should have a pollution with using machines and need to plant more trees in a chemical production areas as it helps to prevent pollution to protect

environment

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Even

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authorities

also

took actions on individuals for damaging and cutting trees because trees are very important part of

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environment

. As an example

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government

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the government

organised the camp for

environment protecting purpose

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the environment, protecting purpose

the environment protecting purpose

and motivating people to grow more trees.

On the other hand

, human beings are one of the considerable part of

environment

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the environment

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So, it is individuals

responsibility

to protect natural Sources from a hazardous

things

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thing

such

as, a blazing fire can get a control by immediate human's actions.

Moreover

, not only preventing has hazardous

things but

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things, but

, people

also

can improve and protect their surrounding areas by taking care of it.

For example

, making surrounding area clean and improving

garbage system

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the garbage system

by creating more facilities attracts people to dump rubbish in a dustbin rather in an environmental places like a

gardens

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garden

. Overall, both

plays

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play

an important role

for

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protecting

environment but, I

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the environment, but I

the environment but, I

strongly believe that

government

can tackle any environmental things because they have all rights for making

environment

safe. So

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the major

responsibility

environment

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environmental

protection

relay

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relays

government

Tue Aug 06 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

316 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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