Today more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this case? What are the benefits of traveling for the travelers?

Nowadays traveling rate
Suggestion
The nowadays travelling rate
Nowadays travelling rate
has risen quite than the past due to beneficial sides and getting pleasure. I believe that there are three cases and two useful sides. To embark on, one of the
factor
Suggestion
factors
for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
is business or related to religion. In past times people had threat to go these cases because of security
,
Accept space
,
but they carried out
this
in
low level
Suggestion
low levels
a low level
.
Secondly
, another factor is that consequence of high-developed technology, a quite more spare time than
past
Suggestion
the past
is available for people. So they want to spend their spare time like holidays or weekends interestingly.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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