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In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people imported food? What could be done to encourage people to local food?

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Many individuals prefer to purchase overseas
food
 as compared to their own country
food
 products.
This
 essay will discuss several reasons related to
this
, and measures that should be adopted to persuade people to buy local produce.
To begin
 with,
first
 and the foremost factor associated with why public import
food
 from developed countries could be understood from the fact that some
food
 products are not available locally.
This
 is because they can be grown in other nations only due to suitable climatic conditions.
For example
, Kiwi fruit, which could cure from some diseases, but it is imported from countries like USA and Canada.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
food
 produced in developing nations often has higher qualities than local ones due to less fertilisers and chemical usage.It is better to buy rich quality
food
.
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.
 In summary, regional
food
 products are not enough to satisfy the needs of the public.
However
, some steps should be taken to encourage consumers to eat
food
 produced locally. Government should invest money to upgrade market to fulfil rudimentary necessities of local residents. More supermarkets providing guaranteed
food
 should be built in the cities and towns.If customers find standard
food
 in their area, they will support their nation.
Furthermore
,
food
 companies need to spread information about their products.
This
 can be done by campaigning through the internet. To conclude,
although
 imported
food
 is incredibly popular among people because of superior quality as well as non availability in the local residential area
,
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,
there should be some methods to promote domestic
food
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allure
  • novelty
  • diversity
  • perception
  • premium
  • globalization
  • cuisines
  • economic factors
  • subsidies
  • tariffs
  • competitive
  • farm-to-table
  • eco-conscious
  • consumption
  • sustainability
  • local economy
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