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Formal examination are a way to get student performance. Many people think that course work and project are important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#examination #student #performance #people #course #work #project
Hand written examination is not only the mode to check
pupils
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pupils'
pupil
pupil's
performance but
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performance, but
 assessment
such
 as course work and projects are
also
 very crucial
.
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.
 I partially agree with the given statement and following paragraphs will discuss both views To commence with, formal exams
is
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are
 very prominent way to measure student performance because hand written exams are one way to find scores of learners.
Moreover these
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Moreover, these
 types of exams are held under the presence of teachers. Formal exams
are
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also help
have also helped
also
 help to increase
scholars
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scholar's
 memory, for the reason that students have to learn the difficult topics to appear in
exam
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the exam
exams
. Moving
further
,
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,
formal exam are not flexible enough to assess
quality
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the quality
 of learners
such
 as confidence. Assessment
such
 as project and presentation is
track
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tracked
 to get
learners
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learners'
 confidence by reason that students may performs stage activities like drama and speeches to increase the confidence level. Single exam not cover all topics of subjects
completely whereas
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completely, whereas
 practical work help them to increase knowledge of
particular subject
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a particular subject
particular subjects
the particular subject
.
For example
, if a student who perform practical tasks about
chemistry ca
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important, but
n
able to le
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
practical
arn more about particular subjects and never forget easi
ly In conclusio
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a specific subject
specific subjects
n, it can said that formal exams are not enough important but practicular tasks are
also
 very helpful to enhance the learning to specific subject

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