Some unversities now offers thrir course on the internet so that people csn study online . Is this a postive or negative development?

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It is undeniable fact that due to the advanced

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

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many

unversities

the body of faculty and students at a university

universities

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nowadays

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provide their course on the

internet

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so people can

study

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online. In my

opion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

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this

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trend has both

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

nrgative

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

developments which I will

discusss

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

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the upcoming paragraphs

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there are

plethora

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a plethora

of benefits of

internet

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base learning

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but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that not only online

study

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saves the quality of time which may waste during the travelling.

Internet

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based learning is the cheaper as compared to the traditional

classes but

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classes, but

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it provides a lot flexibility and students can attain a vast amount of knowledge about any field at siting their own place because

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internet

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the internet

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ocean of knowledge.

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a person who unable to join the traditional classes

becaise

for the reason that; on account of

because

basis

of his work or

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study

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study, then

then

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he can get information about his course from the

internet

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hence

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every person can acquire well education by surfing the

internet

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having a lot positive

beterment

a change for the better; progress in development

betterment

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there are some

negative but

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negative, but

the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that not merely

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students are distracted from their

study

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by interrupting the pop messages. Owing to it

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they cannot concentrate on their

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study

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studies

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but

also

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by the online classes

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it reduces the opportunity to face to face communicate between the students and teacher

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To illustrate a student who

acquire

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acquires

study

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material from the

internet

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he cannot share his problems with his peers and he

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cannot mitigate his issues,

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in the

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last

the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree

least

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he does not satisfied with his result. To recapitulate

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from what has been discussed above

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it can be concluded that

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although

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online

study

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has numerous negative consequences like

distraction

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a distraction

from

study

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and eliminate the connections between students and tutors

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but

also

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there are innumerable

study

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material which enhance the knowledge.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

288 words

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Some unversities now offers thrir course on the internet so that people csn study online . Is this a postive or negative development?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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