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Talk about a house or an apartment you would like to live in. You should say: what it would look like how big it would be where it would be located

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I currently live in our
house
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 which is a 2 storied building. But in the future, I would like to live in a
farmhouse
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 in my
hometown
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. The
house
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 would be a small one with 4-5 rooms in it. But there would be plenty of trees, gardens, ponds and open spaces in from of the
house
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. I want to live
close
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closer
 to nature rather than living in a cramped metropolitan building. The
house
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 would be built with woods, leaves, some modern materials and tin. There would be a big veranda in front of the
house
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. Trees would be all around the
house
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.
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 would not be a very big
house
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 in terms of the size of the rooms. But definitely, the total
farmhouse
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 would be well over 1 acre. I would not require a very big
house
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 because I won’t have different types of furniture and showpieces. I will have only necessary household appliances and furniture.
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house
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 would be located in our
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hometown which
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hometown, which
 is (
…
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…
say your
hometown
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's name...)
in
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In
 (...
say
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Say
 the district/ division/ country name/ city name...). We already have a
house
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there but
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there, but
 I would convert it to a
farmhouse
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 in
future
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the future
 when I will start living there. Currently, I am living in a metropolitan city and leading a busy life. I do not wish to live in
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 crowded and busy city after my retirement. I have a plan to take early retirement and
then
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 build a
farmhouse
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 in my
hometown
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 that would allow me
living
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to live
 in a place which offers fresh air, clean environment, pollution-free living and healthy and fresh food.
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 is the main reason I want to live there.
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, I already have a
house
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 there and converting it to a
farmhouse
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 would not be that difficult.
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, I don’t want to live an idle life after my retirement and building a
farmhouse
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 and living there would allow me to get involved in many works that I won’t be able to do at my current living place.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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