The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar charts provide information about the average
years
Use synonyms
that
people
Use synonyms
spent in school, the
number
Use synonyms
of
scientists
Use synonyms
and
technicians
Use synonyms
, and the
amount
Use synonyms
of
money
Use synonyms
spent on
research
Use synonyms
and
development
Use synonyms
in
both
Use synonyms
developing and industrial
countries
Use synonyms
in 1980 and 1990. The
amount
Use synonyms
of
money
Use synonyms
spent on
research
Use synonyms
and
development
Use synonyms
and the
number
Use synonyms
of
scientists
Use synonyms
and
technicians
Use synonyms
were greater in the industrialized
countries
Use synonyms
than
developing
Change preposition
in developing
show examples
countries
Use synonyms
in
both
Use synonyms
1980 and 1990. The average
years
Use synonyms
of schooling had increased from about 9 to 11
years
Use synonyms
and from about 3 to just below 4
years
Use synonyms
in 1980 and 1990 in
both
Use synonyms
industrialized and
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
developing
countries
Use synonyms
respectively. The
number
Use synonyms
of
scientists
Use synonyms
and
technicians
Use synonyms
had gone up in
both
Use synonyms
developing and industrialized
countries
Use synonyms
in 1990 than it was
in
Change preposition
to
show examples
1980. It was around 10/1000
people
Use synonyms
in 1980
then
Linking Words
raised to just below 20/1000
people
Use synonyms
in 1990 for developing
countries
Use synonyms
. In industrialized
countries
Use synonyms
, it increased from just above 40/1000
people
Use synonyms
to about 70/1000
people
Use synonyms
.
In addition
Linking Words
, the
amount
Use synonyms
of
money
Use synonyms
spent on
research
Use synonyms
and
development
Use synonyms
had raised to almost 350 US billion dollars in industrialized
countries
Use synonyms
in 1990 but decreased to nearly 20Us
billions
Change to singular
billion
show examples
in developing
countries
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
, the average
years
Use synonyms
of schooling and
Use synonyms
number
Change the article
the number
show examples
of
scientists
Use synonyms
and
technicians
Use synonyms
had
been
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
increased in developing and industrialized
countries
Use synonyms
.
While
Linking Words
the
amount
Use synonyms
of
money
Use synonyms
spent on
research
Use synonyms
and
development
Use synonyms
had raised in industrialized
countries
Use synonyms
but declined in developing
countries
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by steffigomes95 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words years, people, number, scientists, technicians, amount, money, research, development, both, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment rates
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • tertiary education
  • literacy rates
  • scientific research
  • research and development (R&D)
  • correlation
  • gender disparities
  • participation
  • developing countries
  • industrialized countries
  • investment
  • comparison
  • impact
  • specified years
What to do next:
Look at other essays: