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The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990
The bar charts provide information about the average
years
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 that
people
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 spent in school, the
number
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 of
scientists
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 and
technicians
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, and the
amount
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 of
money
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 spent on
research
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 and
development
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 in
both
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 developing and industrial
countries
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 in 1980 and 1990. The
amount
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 of
money
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 spent on
research
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 and
development
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 and the
number
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 of
scientists
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 and
technicians
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 were greater in the industrialized
countries
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 than
developing
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countries
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 in
both
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 1980 and 1990. The average
years
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 of schooling had increased from about 9 to 11
years
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 and from about 3 to just below 4
years
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 in 1980 and 1990 in
both
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 industrialized and
the
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developing
countries
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 respectively. The
number
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 of
scientists
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 and
technicians
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 had gone up in
both
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 developing and industrialized
countries
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 in 1990 than it was
in
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 1980. It was around 10/1000
people
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 in 1980
then
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 raised to just below 20/1000
people
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 in 1990 for developing
countries
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. In industrialized
countries
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, it increased from just above 40/1000
people
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 to about 70/1000
people
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.
In addition
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, the
amount
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 of
money
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 spent on
research
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 and
development
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 had raised to almost 350 US billion dollars in industrialized
countries
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 in 1990 but decreased to nearly 20Us
billions
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 in developing
countries
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.
Overall
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, the average
years
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 of schooling and
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number
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the number
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 of
scientists
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 and
technicians
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 had
been
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increased in developing and industrialized
countries
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.
While
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 the
amount
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 of
money
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 spent on
research
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 and
development
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 had raised in industrialized
countries
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 but declined in developing
countries
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, people, number, scientists, technicians, amount, money, research, development, both, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment rates
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • tertiary education
  • literacy rates
  • scientific research
  • research and development (R&D)
  • correlation
  • gender disparities
  • participation
  • developing countries
  • industrialized countries
  • investment
  • comparison
  • impact
  • specified years
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