The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990
The bar charts provide information about the average
years
that people
spent in school, the number
of scientists
and technicians
, and the amount
of money
spent on research
and development
in both
developing and industrial countries
in 1980 and 1990. The amount
of money
spent on research
and development
and the number
of scientists
and technicians
were greater in the industrialized countries
than developing
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in developing
countries
in both
1980 and 1990.
The average years
of schooling had increased from about 9 to 11 years
and from about 3 to just below 4 years
in 1980 and 1990 in both
industrialized and the
developing Correct article usage
apply
countries
respectively.
The number
of scientists
and technicians
had gone up in both
developing and industrialized countries
in 1990 than it was in
1980. It was around 10/1000 Change preposition
to
people
in 1980 then
raised to just below 20/1000 people
in 1990 for developing countries
. In industrialized countries
, it increased from just above 40/1000 people
to about 70/1000 people
. In addition
, the amount
of money
spent on research
and development
had raised to almost 350 US billion dollars in industrialized countries
in 1990 but decreased to nearly 20Us billions
in developing Change to singular
billion
countries
.
Overall
, the average years
of schooling and number
of Change the article
the number
scientists
and technicians
had been
increased in developing and industrialized Unnecessary verb
apply
countries
. While
the amount
of money
spent on research
and development
had raised in industrialized countries
but declined in developing countries
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