Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

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As you are the listed contact of customer service for Homegrown Fabrics, I write to you regarding an incomplete delivery of order number Z111-563-90.

Last

friday

the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day

Friday

, I placed an order for a hand woven silk scarf and a silk tie through the website of your company. The order was delivered today, but to my surprise the box was missing the bow tie.

This

item is of extreme emotional importance for me because

this

combination box will my gift to my grandparents on their seventy fifth wedding anniversary, which is in four days from today. I will be hugely disappointed to not being able to give anything to my grandfather on

this

occasion.

Therefore

, I request you to please look into

this

matter with

utmost urgency

Suggestion

the utmost urgency

and make arrangements for the missing item to be delivered within the

three days. I will be grateful if you could

also

send me an email with the details of the parcel and a tracking number for the courier company. I hope that you will treat my complaint on priority.

Wed Aug 07 2019

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Fully explain your ideas

It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. To what extent do you agree ?

Some people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while others prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, people work in more than one job, and often change their career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Some people think it would be a good idea for school to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this option ? Describe the skill a person needs to be a good parent.