Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Knowledge is power; Right to
education
must be a fundamental right for everyone.
Education
gives an individual the chance to prove his
competancy
the quality of being adequately or well qualified physically and intellectually
competency
competence
, emphasize his skills and
also
help
in
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with
economic growth of the country. The USA is considered as one of the top economic
country but
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country, but
is riddled in billions of student loans.
Education
is expensive because of less state funding, pay to the teachers, financial aid and so on. Government should focus
more on funding for
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on more funding for
education
so that
children atleast get
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children get at least
children at least get
basic
education
to read, write and speak. For 3rd world countries providing basic
education
also
might be a stretch due to low economy. In
such
countries we should try and make use of
internet
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the internet
and access to many online content to impart knowledge to children.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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