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Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that any citizen who reaches the
age
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 of 18, he/she will be capable of holding driving license and can
drive
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 a vehicle on his/her own. Others think that it’s too early to allow those youth to
drive
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 and they can’t be permitted to
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 unless they become 25 years old at least. Many feel that the
age
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 of 18 is suitable enough to allow people to have their driving licences.They adopt
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 claim as they see anyone at the
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 of 18 will have all the mental and physical abilities to take the responsibility of driving without any risk on the others
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
. Despite the argument above, it is difficult to argue with the fact that some people at that
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 still behave in a reckless way and can’t bear the responsibility so far. They
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 claim that allowing people under 25 to
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 is not only
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a catastrophe
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 but it
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 endangers the life of the others in the same community. In conclusion
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I think the
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 only can’t be the criteria of allowing or banning anyone from driving.A lot of other factors must be taken into consideration while determining the appropriate
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 for something like that.
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, anyone who wants to bear a driving license
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 he should
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 pass comprehensive driving course governed by the government in order to make sure of his/her eligibility to hold
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 license and not to endanger the others
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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