The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram display the features of a wave-energy

machine

and suitable places to install them. The wave-energy

machine

comprises of two chambers: the upper chamber is connected to the generator and turbine,

whereas

, the lower chamber is where the sea water comes in. Air can flow in and out of both chambers. Electricity is generated by the spinning of the turbines by the wind from two sources: air which flows in from the top valve of the upper chamber and the wind created by the rising of the water levels below, caused by the incoming waves. Since the power of the generator depends upon how much wind is blowing in, and

thus

the strength of the currents, it matters where the

machine

is located. The

further

the distance from the shore, the greater the output. The wave-energy

machine

is an eco-friendly energy source, relying only the naturally available air and the waves of the ocean.

Thu Aug 08 2019

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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5 paragraphs

155 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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