Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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These days with increasing urban populations, there are major problems with congestion and not only the price, but
also
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availability of accommodation in large cities of the world. It seems that one possible solution could be to relocate large companies and factories as well as their respective employees out of these urban areas and into more rural ones. I strongly agree that
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would have a positive effect in making cities more livable.
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with, the
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problem in cities doesn’t only exist from commuting employees, but
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the general public travelling around the
city
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. While
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may be a fact, if the number of workers' vehicles is reduced on
city
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streets, a large percentage of
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traffic
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the traffic
will obviously decline in rush hours.
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, peak hour of the
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is undoubtedly made up largely of staff from companies going to and from home.
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, in regards to housing problems, populations will always continue to grow in cities and
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inadvertently decrease the number of cheap and available apartments.
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is certainly obvious,
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, a large proportion of these apartments are occupied by employees of large firms and their families. If
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workforce is relocated to housing estates in the country,
city
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apartment blocks will fall in price and certainly increase in availability. In conclusion, by relocating workers to rural areas to work and reside, heavy
traffic
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conditions and lack of adequate accommodation in
city
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centres will obviously change for the better. As far as I’m concerned, I agree that the government should enforce
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a law in order to increase our standard of living in our hectic
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life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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