The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

As the most of the countries’ revenue is collected from the public through the taxation system, it is imperative that governments spend the available fund for the most effective public services of the nation which is beneficial to society at large. Some people believe that governments should allocate sufficient fund for promoting music and arts as these kinds of entertainment activities help adults as well as children

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much relaxation, reduce their tensions and

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in their busy day to day life.

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, from my point of view, countries should employ most of their funds in important public services

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and transport systems rather spending money on entertainment activities as

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is less beneficial to the public than that of the important the three sectors mentioned above. The most important

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of the economy is the

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as the development of in

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sector

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is one of the crucial requirements for a sustainable growth of a

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in a long run. The governments all over the world have the responsibility to ensure that every citizen of the

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is educated, at least to read and write. The investment in

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sector

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will be in the form of establishing more schools, universities and vocational training centres for the school

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providing scholarships for continuing higher

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essential

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of the economy is the

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healthiest

. It is vital that everyone in the society has the means to get the basic

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benefits. Governments can invest in the

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in many ways. The medical practitioners should be taken care by providing them with the sufficient remuneration and benefits so that the

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could be avoided.

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, the authorities can educate the general public and implement many vaccination programs across the countries to eradicate many diseases

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as polio, chicken pox and malaria. The

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but not the least significant

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of the

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is the public transportation system. States’ funds should be deployed in putting up proper transport network systems

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as the building of metro-train facility around the city. More lanes on the highway roads can be built to facilitate the car-pooling for the commuters.

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facility will reduce the carbon fuel emission and helps to reduce the global warming. In conclusion, governments should spend a major portion of their funds on highly demanding public-service sectors

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and public transportation rather than spending a huge money on the entertainment sectors

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as theatres and music.