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Write to your friend telling him to take care of your home while you are away You should state • How long you would be away • Contact to reach you • What you want him to do.

#friend #care #home #contact
Dear
Derey
a daily written record of (usually personal) experiences and observations
diary
Dewey
, I hope you are doing well. I write to inform you that I would be out of town for about four weeks to see my parents in the countryside and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 want you to help take care of my house while I am away. I have dropped the keys with my
next
 door neighbour. In case you need to contact me, my phone lines will be unreachable;
nevertheless
, you can reach me on my mother’s telephone number- 0803837368. There are a few things that need to be taken care of but the most important chores which I would love you to personally handle for me would be
firstly
, to help feed Cherry (my dog) twice daily. I have kept his meals at the cupboard close to the kitchen entrance. You can
also
 bathe him once a week.
In addition
, kindly water my garden every other day. You will gain access to the garden through the small gate just opposite the kitchen door
at
Suggestion
in
 the backyard. The watering tools are right in front of the entrance of the garden. I sincerely hope
this
 is not too much of me to ask. I appreciate you my dear friend. Hope to see you real soon.
You
rs sincerely, Jovids
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