Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Students
Suggestion
Students'
Student
performance is a relevant discussion, due to the fact that they need to be
avaliated
evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
evaluated
in
differents
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
areas of knowledge. The most famous way to evaluate them is the application of examinations,
although
, there are some controversial aspects of
this
action. I would say that I do not agree
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
with
this
conduct, taking in consideration the flaws that they
migth
expresses possibility
might
have. In
this
essay, it will be discussed both sides of
this
statement.
Firstly
, the exams can force and
incentivate
a positive motivational influence
incentive
students to study harder, and gain
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
. It is a method to select who is ready or
not to
Accept comma addition
not, to
complete
a
Suggestion
an
academic year and helps universities to choose the better and more prepared student to join with them.
Moreover
, it is a way to show students what they need to improve and their
relavants
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
mistakes. Teachers
also
fell
mat together and make felt-like
felt
more confidant
Suggestion
more confident
when they are
seing
having vision, not blind
seeing
seen
saying
the results of a long academic preparation stage.
In
Suggestion
On
the other hand, exams can make students
fell
mat together and make felt-like
felt
drepress
lower than previously
depressed
when they don't
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
their goals, it can
estimulate
act as a stimulant
stimulate
a bad competition among them, can cause stress and anxiety. The final result of
a
Suggestion
an
exam can be related to their social, familiar and economical situation, and sometimes do not
transmite
transfer to another
transmit
transmute
the real level of
inteligence
the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience
intelligence
of
someone
any person
anyone
. Recents
researchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
researches
research
demonstrate that
the betters
Suggestion
the best
the better
education
sytems
instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity
systems
system
in the world
includes
Suggestion
include
others
stragegies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
as art, music and sport projects. The
majoroty
the property resulting from being or relating to the greater in number of two parts; the main part
majority
of the score
are based
Suggestion
is based
on respect inside class, leadership and
creativation
socialization through training and education to develop one's mind or manners
cultivation
. To conclude, exams are a traditional and correct form to
examinate
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
examine
students,
although
, cannot show
students
Suggestion
students'
student's
habilities
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
abilities
and do not teach them
importants
of great significance or value
important
things
as
Accept comma addition
as, for
for example
, respect of the environment and to
others
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
humans; do not
incentivate
a positive motivational influence
incentive
them to follow their real dream; do not help them with social problems common in
younghood
Suggestion
young hood
.
In addition
, a lot of
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
don
do not
don't
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