You have just heard some good news about your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how you heard the news • arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house • explain what you will bring with you

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Dear Ashraf, How are you? At

first

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I want to express my happiness

for

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with

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the good news I had heard about you, and let me congratulate you

for

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the new

baby

. I was known that you have got a new

baby

when our common friend Ibrahim met me in(at) the morning

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the bus station and I asked him about you, he was very glad to tell me that good news. I ask you to permit me

visiting

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you at your home. I am very interesting to take a glance

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the new

baby

and your wife, I will visit you

Friday at 8pm if

this

time is not suitable for you please inform me when I can visit you. I would be proud to bring a gift for the

baby

. It will be the

first

gift you being for him, it contains a new shirt, cap and a pair of socks.

In addition

the

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baby

`s gift I will bring

pocket

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of flowers for your wife. I look forward to

see

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you soon.

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Yours

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Your

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sincerely Ahmed

shawky

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shaky

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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