It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

Media influence was once considered a myth.

However

, over the years,

this

narrative once peddled, mostly by the older generation, has been proven untrue. The reach and influence of media now transcend past the known traditional sphere, with entry into digital media. The influence, interestingly, now controls and

shapens

any spatial attributes (especially as defined by outline)

shapes

sharpens

narratives in the modern age society, and has become the perfect tool wielded by opportunists across many spheres. The reach spans quite a number spheres, but isn't limited to, the political, social, and religious spheres. Quite a number of proponets for having a full-blown media rich society,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why might this be the case? do you think this is positive or negative development?

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