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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There has been an ongoing controversy which has led to the question “Do individuals place preference
on
Suggestion
for
 carrying out
school
 assignments in teams or personally?” As much as people like personal study to avoid biased opinion from others, I believe strongly that
,
Accept space
,
 homeworks are easily performed in groups than individually because it produces better results and broadens
ones
Suggestion
one's
 knowledge. On one hand, human beings like the idea of doing the assignment being given to them by their institution on their own because of the high rise of
biase
a partiality that prevents objective consideration of an issue or situation
bias
biases
bees
 that may erupt. It has been discovered that people who carry out
school
 research individually, tend to build their confidence
overtime
Suggestion
over time
 as no one will put them down publicly while suggestions are brought up during deliberations on the solution.
On the other hand
, the power of
team
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
work
 in resolving a research
work
 given by
ones
Suggestion
one
one's
 institution cannot be overemphasized
,
Accept space
,
as
this
 will improve ones IQ magnificently.
In addition
, the ideas being given by other researchers in the group will broaden your knowledge and scope of how things
work
 and
further
 educate you.
For instance
, a set of 5 students found out that people who
work
 together in researching on a
school
 homework, produce better results which can serve for reference purposes. In conclusion, people like to do
school
deligations
a group of representatives or delegates
delegations
 in a group than by
one self
reflexive form of "one"
oneself
 for many reasons.
However
, in my opinion the essence of working in a group is to understand better ways of doing things and producing future articles for upcoming researchers.
This
 will
further
 improve our libraries and assist anyone carrying out
such
 project in the future.

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