Some People think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government
all around the world are facing inevitable problems
such
as unemployment and the rise in crime rate. Some persons believe that the
government
should spend
money
on public facilities which includes
health
care, schools and public transport, rather than squandering it on arts
such
as museums, galleries and theatre.
Although
, I do not think that the
amount
of funding is spent on the arts by the
government
is wastage as it represents the country's culture. Those who advocate the expenditure of
government
funds on the other facilities believe that it would enhance the people's
health
and
student's education
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the student's education
.
Firstly
, when
higher organisation
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a higher organisation
the higher organisation
starts spending a huge
amount
of
money
on
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in
at
the hospital,
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
this
will boost the
health
of the local people.
For example
, a recent data collected from the local hospitals revealed that an advanced facilities available in the hospitals, helps the doctor to cure the vulnerable diseases.
Secondly
,
government
money
when spends
on
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at
in
the school
also
become beneficial for students as they get the updated education with practical skills.
Moreover
, highly qualified teachers are
also
hired by the school due availability of enough
money
.
Thus
,
health
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the health
of the indigenous people and
school's
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school
education can be improved by the
government
money
.
However
, I support the ideas of spending
little
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a little amount
amount
of
government
on the arts as
this
will enrich the
nations
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nation's
heritage and
also
provide livelihood to some people. To make it more clear, when
such
money
is used for the maintenance of the museums and heritage
bulidings
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
buildings
,
then
more and more people from
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
places visit to see it. It could
help in rising the
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help with the rising
help with rising the
number of visitors and economy growth.
For instance
, some developing countries started expanding some
amount
of
government penny
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a government penny
on the historical buildings and in return gained benefit in terms of foreign currency.
Similarly
,
this
will
also
opens
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open
the
jobs
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job
opportunities for the local people in the form of transport or guide.
Therefore
,
expanditure
money paid out; an amount spent
expenditure
expenditures
of
governement
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
on the arts is not considered wastage. In conclusion, people think that
large
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a large amount
amount
of the
government
funds should
goes
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go
to the public facilities as compared to the arts. In my opinion, museums and galleries do need some aides from
government
to maintain their effectiveness throughout.
Submitted by Rajneet Kaur on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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