Some People think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government

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all around the world are facing inevitable problems

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as unemployment and the rise in crime rate. Some persons believe that the

government

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should spend

money

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on public facilities which includes

health

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care, schools and public transport, rather than squandering it on arts

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as museums, galleries and theatre.

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, I do not think that the

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of funding is spent on the arts by the

government

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is wastage as it represents the country's culture. Those who advocate the expenditure of

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funds on the other facilities believe that it would enhance the people's

health

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and

student's education

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the student's education

.

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, when

higher organisation

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a higher organisation

the higher organisation

starts spending a huge

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of

money

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on

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in

at

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then

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than

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will boost the

health

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of the local people.

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, a recent data collected from the local hospitals revealed that an advanced facilities available in the hospitals, helps the doctor to cure the vulnerable diseases.

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,

government

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money

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when spends

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at

in

the school

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become beneficial for students as they get the updated education with practical skills.

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, highly qualified teachers are

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hired by the school due availability of enough

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.

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,

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health

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the health

of the indigenous people and

school's

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school

education can be improved by the

government

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money

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.

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, I support the ideas of spending

little

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a little amount

amount

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of

government

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on the arts as

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will enrich the

nations

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nation's

heritage and

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provide livelihood to some people. To make it more clear, when

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money

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is used for the maintenance of the museums and heritage

bulidings

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

buildings

,

then

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more and more people from

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

places visit to see it. It could

help in rising the

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help with the rising

help with rising the

number of visitors and economy growth.

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, some developing countries started expanding some

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of

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government penny

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a government penny

on the historical buildings and in return gained benefit in terms of foreign currency.

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,

this

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will

also

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opens

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open

the

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job

opportunities for the local people in the form of transport or guide.

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,

expanditure

money paid out; an amount spent

expenditure

expenditures

of

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

on the arts is not considered wastage. In conclusion, people think that

large

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a large amount

amount

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of the

government

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funds should

goes

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go

to the public facilities as compared to the arts. In my opinion, museums and galleries do need some aides from

government

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to maintain their effectiveness throughout.