In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing? You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Every city has its architectural character, but the similarities between
cities
are more obvious these days than in the past. In my opinion, one reason for
this
is the high price of land. In most large
cities
, land is scarce and
consequently
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it is very valuable.
This
has led to the construction of tall
buildings
which occupy only a small area of land
while
providing lots of floor space where people can live or work.
Buildings
of
this
type are made of concrete and steel and can be built comparatively quickly using prefabricated materials. They do not use local materials,
such
as stone, timber or brick, which
used
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to give
cities
their individual character. In consequence many
cities
.
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now look very much the same and you might not know whether you were in Brisbane, Bangkok or Berlin when you are on the street.
While
I realise that we cannot stand in the way of progress, I believe that
cities
should try to keep some individuality.
For example
, in
Paris
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Paris,
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it is prohibited to build very tall
buildings
in the centre of the city, as
this
would spoil the
overall
appearance of the skyline. Other
cities
have chosen to design unique
buildings
to ensure they look different. The
twin towers
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in Kuala Lumpur
or
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and
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the Opera House in Sydney are examples of
this
approach, and I agree with
this
kind of initiative. All in all,
although
it is regrettable that
modem
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cities
look similar, I tend to feel that
this
is unavoidable.
However
, it can be argued that, even if the
buildings
are similar,
cities
will maintain their own character
as a result
of cultural diversity, the terrain and the climate, which ultimately determine how people live.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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