The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting
The paragraph illustrates how much information from the
tourist
office
was sent to tourism through three different methods from January
2011 to June 2011.
In January
, below 800 inquiries were transferred to the tourist
office
by telephone, leading to a slight decrease until May when it leveled
out, at about 400 telephones. The Change the spelling
levelled
number
of tourists visiting the office
directly started off with lowest
in Correct article usage
the lowest
January
. However
, in April, it increased considerably overtook
the Correct word choice
and overtook
number
Change preposition
of letter
letter
/mail and Fix the agreement mistake
letters
a
telephone sent to the Correct article usage
apply
office
.
The total number
of letters/mails
received was roughly 900 in Correct your spelling
emails
January
, which fluctuated between January
and March before rising gradually to nearly 1600 in June 2011. While
,
there was a significant climb in the Remove the comma
apply
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
travelers
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travellers
came
to Correct pronoun usage
who came
Tourist
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the Tourist
office
from over 400 persons in January
2011 to approximately 1900 persons at the end
of period
.
Add an article
the period
Overall
, it is clear that
between January
2011 and June 2011, the number
of tourists and people called
up Correct pronoun usage
who called
Tourist
information Correct article usage
the Tourist
office
grew up dramatically over the period, while
the figure for travellers got
information via mail/letter declined steadily.
There is a commonCorrect pronoun usage
who got
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourist, office, january, number with synonyms.
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