1. You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

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Dear George, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and the best of spirits. How is your work going? I hope everything goes fine. I am writing

this

letter to invite you

for

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a holiday

that is

planned

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first

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week of

month. Due to some unforeseen circumstances, my brother who was planned to accompany me will not be able to join me during the holiday. An unplanned visit of his client entails him

to stay

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back. I have booked two tickets to Malaysia and Singapore. There are

lot

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of sightseeing locations as well as various amusement parks, which we would cover in our tour plan. I have

also

booked

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a skilled tourist guide, which will add more to our journey. He will be taking us to all the prominent tourist locations. My joy will know no bounds

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if you accept

this

invitation. I am sure that you will be accompanying me, as I know

this

is one of your favourite tourist spots. It has been

long

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, seeing you and I assure you that,

this

journey will rejuvenate your mind. Anticipating

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a positive response from your side! Yours Faithfully

Merrybel

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Merryl

Submitted by george.rosebel on Sun Aug 11 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

195 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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1. You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

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