Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Celebrities,
such
as actors and singers, are known to be constantly under the spotlight. On one hand,
this
is in favour of the celebrity who
recieves
get something; come into possession of
receives
media
coverage
, a fact that assist in him greatly his career.
On the other hand
, the media intrudes on their privacy and prevent them to have a normal
life
which, by many can be very disturbing.
Although
I understand that being constantly watched by journalists can be distressing, I think celebrities earn a very good salary
as a result
of media
coverage
, and should
understant
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
it is an invaluable part of their career. Being constantly under media
coverage
can affect a
celebritiy's
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celebrity's
celebrities
celebrity
life
substantially, because it is impossible to have a private family
life
when every aspect of it is published and reported. Every person, regardless of his profession, wants to go home to his family and have a safe and secure environment, without the need to constantly think about how he looks, and what he says. When
this
safe environment is gone, people
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their worm place and are constantly under stress and fear, leading to depression and
anxiaty
(psychiatry) a relatively permanent state of worry and nervousness occurring in a variety of mental disorders, usually accompanied by compulsive behavior or attacks of panic
anxiety
.
This
has been shown in a recent publication by California University, who have shown an incidence of 20% in depression and substance abuse among
famous people
Suggestion
the famous people
who received massive media
coverage
. Despite that, I believe celebrities should not blame the media for intruding on their personal
life
, as famous people utilize journalists and media
coverage
in order to increase their earnings. It is well known, that the more a famous person is exposed
on
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to
public media, the more he is recognized.
This
recognition, increases his chances of being signed up for a show, a movie or a commercial, which will increase his earnings.
As a result
, many celebrities inform their location to journalists in order to increase their chances of being on the news,
thus
promoting their career.
This
fact has been used among many celebrities like Sia,
Ladey
a woman of the peerage in Britain
Lady
Gaga and others, who even hired a personal photographer to go along with them to post pictures online constantly. To conclude, having media
coverage
is, in many cases, intruding and uncomfortable. Despite that, I believe that it serves the celebrities and help them to earn higher income. Being a celebrity in, unfortunately, a full time job.
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